At the Mountains of Madness

Well, at first I should agree with the previous critique, I see nothing better or different than what he saw. The shoggoth is rather comical but so is the action of fleeing and anyway that is your inimitable style. Your cartoons resemble those of DrFaustus AU. Very amusing, and yet the air of fear is still there. The color and manner of presentation is very good. But again, you are that way. It is a shame that Weird Tales did not invite you to revamp their issues. The only "fault" in this is that the mountains are missing. Another background may be better. The rest is good.